Thoughtful Word Choices

For this posting I will be rethinking my word choices and replacing my "weak" words with more exciting and thoughtful ones.

For example I used the word "hot" in my memoir (second paragraph, second sentence). I think it would be suitable to use the words "blistering hot" instead. I also used the word "lame" and I don't think that is very scholarly so I will replace it with the word "bizarre".